“LOW CALORIE HYDRATOR”
March 5th, 2008, by Kirk MahoneyI saw this during a Gatorade G2 television commercial.
Problem:
A hyphen is missing.
Explanation:
When an adjective plus a noun modify another noun, the adjective and first noun must be joined with a hyphen to form the modifier of the second noun.
So the adjective “LOW” plus the first noun “CALORIE” must be joined with a hyphen to form the modifier of the second noun “HYDRATOR”.
Unfortunately, many advertising copywriters believe that it is appropriate to drop required hyphens in their advertising copy. I disagree.
Although this is not the best example, there are many examples where the absence of a required hyphen leads to confusion and double- or triple-pass reading of copy to understand what the copywriter meant.
Solution:
“LOW-CALORIE HYDRATOR”
Copyright © 2008 Kirk Mahoney, Ph.D.
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