{"id":500,"date":"2009-02-03T12:00:18","date_gmt":"2009-02-03T18:00:18","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.kirkmahoney.com\/blog\/2009\/02\/economy-suicide-link\/"},"modified":"2011-05-31T12:16:40","modified_gmt":"2011-05-31T18:16:40","slug":"economy-suicide-link","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.kirkmahoney.com\/wordpress\/blog\/2009\/02\/economy-suicide-link\/","title":{"rendered":"&#8220;ECONOMY SUICIDE LINK&#8221;"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I saw this headline two mornings ago on CNN.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Problem:<\/strong><br \/>\nA slash or more words are missing.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Explanation:<\/strong><br \/>\nThe headline appeared in a banner beneath the journalist during a news story on the Cable News Network television channel.<\/p>\n<p>My immediate reaction: &#8220;Huh?&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Because so many Americans use the noun &#8220;economy&#8221; instead of &#8220;economical&#8221; as an adjective, my first impression was that the story was about economical suicides.<\/p>\n<p>I said to myself, &#8220;<em>Economical<\/em> suicides? Huh?&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>I then saw the word &#8220;LINK&#8221; and initially wondered to WHAT economical suicides were links.<\/p>\n<p>I doubt that the headline writer was trying to be provocative by creating some sort of confusing headline.<\/p>\n<p>Instead, I believe that the headline writer was trying to say in as few words as possible that there was a possible link between the U.S. economy and the suicide rate.<\/p>\n<p>The problem with this &#8220;as few words as possible&#8221; approach is that it can often lead to confusing instead of concise headlines.<\/p>\n<p>Assuming that the headline system at a TV network such as CNN automatically adjusts the font size to make the characters fit the width of the banner, there truly was not a good reason to write something as cryptic as &#8220;ECONOMY SUICIDE LINK&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p>I would not use a hyphen between &#8220;ECONOMY&#8221; and &#8220;SUICIDE&#8221; because many people still would see that as some sort of reference to economical suicides.<\/p>\n<p>The solution to this confusion comes, in my opinion, from a slash or a few more words.<\/p>\n<p>The reason that I recommend a slash instead of a hyphen is:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>A slash connects two words but tells the reader to treat the two words as separate concepts, activities, or entities.<\/li>\n<li>A hyphen connects two words and tells the reader that the first word modifies the second word.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>The news story was about the connection between separate activities &#8212; the U.S. economy and suicides &#8212; NOT about using &#8220;ECONOMY&#8221; to modify &#8220;SUICIDE&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Solution:<\/strong><br \/>\n&#8220;ECONOMY\/SUICIDE LINK&#8221;<br \/>\nor<br \/>\n&#8220;LINK BETWEEN ECONOMY AND SUICIDE (RATES)&#8221;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I saw this headline two mornings ago on CNN. 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